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Veldin's Nightmare Chapter 6 by ~Titanjak:iconTitanjak:



**Veldin’s Nightmare Chapter 6**
“Reincarnation”
(Btw I changed Vexx’s name is Zexx, is has more of a ring to it.)
Jak thought all hope was lost. He was slightly crying in the cell of Dark maker Prison Carrier. It was dark and damp, Clank and Daxter in separate cells moping. They thought all was lost. They were wrong…
Zexx was piloting the ship in deep space back to a planet in the galaxy of Precursia. He slammed a button and the ship nudged and jumped into hyper drive. The stars were flying past like rockets. It really was a beautiful sight. But Zexx didn’t like this. He hated everything. Slamming another button the blinds came down and he started playing some classical music. (Maybe the only thing he liked.)
Clank had been completely silent until the guards came in with direct orders to stop Clank from escaping. All you could hear was screaming and metal tearing apart. Jak started slamming on the bars of the cage like cell. He exploded into a shining light. All that was left was a white shaped angel with bright blue eyes. A deep yet load voice came from the Angel who’s mouth wasn’t moving. “Let him go!” The Angel boomed.
The guards had finished and walked over to the Angel that was formerly Jak. Ah yes, I’ve heard of these ‘powers’ you have. Men take him to the brig.” Jak struggled as they put cuffs on him and he humped as if shocked. He fell to the floor and was dragged out.
The Dark Eco mutated guards lifted him into the large cockpit of the ship where Zexx was listening to music.
“Sir, we found something interesting.” A guard cried out to his cruel boss.
“How, DARE you interrupt me? It better be important.” He yelled back.
“Th.. The… The prisoner has eco channeling abilities more advanced than out highest rank soldiers.” The guard answered nervously.
Zexx looked around staring at the dirty Man with flowing Platinum Blonde hair. “Excellent. Get Nefarious down here. I want to conduct some… Ahem… Experiments.”
“Right away!” The guard said saluting.
Nefarious and Zexx were standing around a large machine that had a ring with long needle like apparatuses. Jak was strapped into the middle reminding him of his prison days.
Jak started to have a flashback…
Surrounding him were two figures; Erol and the ruler of the city and a villain,
Baron Praxis.

“Dark Eco injection cycle complete. Bio readings nominal and
unchanged.” A computer zapped and beeped.
“Hhhppp. Nothing! I was informed that this one might be different!” A large man said.
“He is surprisingly resistant to your 'experiments' Baron Praxis. I fear
the Dark Warrior program has failed.” Replied a skinnier more younger figure.
“Aaaagh! You should at least be dead with all the Dark Eco I've pumped
into you!” Praxie Yelled grabbing onto Jak.
“What now? Metal Head armies are pressing their attacks. Without a new
weapon, my men cannot hold them off forever!” Erol yelled back.
“I will not be remembered as the man who lost this city to those vile
creatures! Move forward with the final plan! And finish off this 'thing'
tonight!” Praxis smiled as he walked out.
“As you wish.” He said while grabbing Jak by the throat. “I'll be back later...” He said as he walked out.

Jak started to scream as he woke up. Still screaming he tried to rip the restrains off. “No, no, no we can’t have you escaping now can we?” Zexx said again leaning over. “Start the eco treatment. The rind around his body spun at phenomenal speeds spreading a grey eco into the hero.
Jak was starting to feel déjà vu when all of a sudden the alarms started ringing.
“What is it now!” Nefarious screamed, freezing and jolted in one place. An old soapie started playing.
“Oh Janice… Oh Lance… We are together again Janice… How so?” Lawrence walked in and bitch slapped him on que.
The alarms kept ringing and the hallways exploded with flames. A hooded figure ran in with a black cloak streaming behind him. He ripped out a sword and The robot that was Lawrence was a pile of scrap falling into the crevasse around the chamber.
Zexx electrocuted The stranger with dark eco. The clocked figure ripped off the cloak showing a much more aged, ripped Lombax.
The echo of Jak’s screams could be heard around the chamber as Ratchet stood there for a second and all of a sudden He put his hand up and flames shot out surrounding Zexx and disintegrated him. With a smile on this Lombax’s face that resembled Ratchet was as if he was happy. “I’ve been waiting to do this for a long time for this…” Ratchet stated. “A Long… Long… Long time…”
I pulled the sword out of his back sword holder and sliced Nefarious in half. He stumbled for a second and fell apart. The scrap metal and ashes of Zexx made a crunching sound as Ratchet walked over and ripped the machine out of the wall. Pulling Jak out he ran down the hall towards the Prison cells.
A group of Twilight Soldiers stood behind an enraged Kal. “You killed him you monster…” Kal cried.
“You’re the monster” Ratchet said in a deeper voice laying Jak down. “I’ve grown a custom to these elemental powers I’ve grown over the years… And it’s going to be the end of all of you… You will all perish at my hands!” Ratchet screamed his arm morphing into metal and stretching out to hit them.
Kal dodged swiftly. The Soldiers weren’t as fast. They all fell as Ratchet whipped his arm back. Ripping off his Chest plate, Ratchet prepared for battle. His scars, leaving pink lines on his brown fur. His ripped body looked like he had been working out for years. His face ruffled up. His eyebrows in a deathly shape.

Unsheathing his long cleaver like sword he ran with a slight limp. Kal also ran forwards but his arms changed into large blades. With a clash and explosion of eco and elements flew around the room, rocking the ship.
To… be… Continued….
Woah this feels cool. EENNNJOOYYY
©2009 ~Titanjak
:icontitanjak:

Author's Comments

I feel happy to have got this off my chest. I've been thing about it for days. The SECRETS I'VE BEEN KEEPING! Oh, and a BIG thanks to :iconsaberwind: for his countless help in getting me to write again. Thanks so much Buddy!

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:iconfuzzy-lombax-ears:
hahah, thats interesting, i hope i get to read whats up with ratchet : >
elemental powers? lol thats cool, wonder where he got them from

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Why is Europe like a giant frying pan?
Because Greece is at the bottom *shot*
:icontitanjak:
That's for me to know and you to find out next chapter :D

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It's Dancing Time!
:iconfuzzy-lombax-ears:
cant wait : D

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Why is Europe like a giant frying pan?
Because Greece is at the bottom *shot*
:icontitanjak:
Neither can I! Wait... No...

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It's Dancing Time!
:iconfuzzy-lombax-ears:
lol : >

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Why is Europe like a giant frying pan?
Because Greece is at the bottom *shot*
:iconthegrimfire:
Awesome. 8D

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Men who draw nude female cartoon charecters, making themselves date them, or day dream of having sex with them have no life at all. :pointandlaugh:

They need to nucking get out more and get a life!!! :meow:
:icontitanjak:
Thanks

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It's Dancing Time!
:iconorumon:
You give us such a great ending last chapter and then you tell us there's more? You spoil us, truly.

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Children becomes an adolescents when they realise adults aren't perfect.

Adolescents become adults when they realise they aren't perfect.

Adults become wise when the learn to forgive imperfection.

I guess I'm an adult then :(
:icontitanjak:
Not my fault....

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It's Dancing Time!

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